I thought of that and yes some looked like they were borderline male models, but not all of them.

I’d say half of these guys were average looking at best.

Rather than think too hard and try to be overly clever, there are a few simple things you can do that can make your personality show through. We’ve all been there: you don’t want to sound arrogant, but you don’t want to come across as a loser either, so where do you draw the line? Instead of writing about yourself per se, show yourself by using external things.

For example, you can write about your hobbies, daily life, things you do, things you’d like to do (places you’d like to visit, new skills you are learning or want to learn), things that make you happy (or unhappy, though generally, it’s best to stick with the positive as much as possible), etc.

Below is part of a slightly edited great dating profile example written by a woman.

Likes: my dog, laughter, my kindle, honesty, music, curiosity, sprawling vistas, leisurely walks, foodgasms, volleyball, kisses, lattes, road trips, manhattan(the place and the beverage) and anything benedict (except for arnold), and kindness. Dislikes: calories, bugs, dishonesty, tomatoes, black licorice (and anything that tastes like it), eye rolls, poor grammar/spelling, tactlessness, juggalos, black coffee, doing dishes, and the price of gas.Now on to my findings, which will basically be a quantitative and qualitative analysis of about twenty different mens’ Plenty of Fish online dating profiles that indicated a high female attraction rate.I know what your going to say, these guys were all naturally handsome.For example, while some things may make you come across as slightly arrogant, there is nothing wrong with writing about past or present achievements that make you proud.Writing about how you taught yourself guitar from scratch , for example, would make a better read than simply saying “I am a great musician”.